Final Project: Typologies of Walking/Not
Corrected by a Teacher
Typologies of Walking/Not: Final Project
Medium: Walking-based performance, red flair pen, red chalk, and iPhone photography
Walk 1 (Park): Red
Walk 2 (Stores): Yellow
Walk 3 (Drive to work): Purple
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Artist Statement/Reflection
How do we hold systems accountable?
As a former K–6 teacher and now a future art teacher, I have spent years surrounded by rubrics, feedback, and grades. I have written thousands of comments meant to guide students. But too often, grades become measures of worth, power, and control. They are shaped by systemic pressures rather than genuine learning, Focusing on students grades as a way to measure the schools worth and my own dangling funding and other things in front of public schools. In the schools where I taught, underfunded and overburdened, grading hid much larger issues.
So I flipped it.
This walking-based intervention redirects the familiar grading language and uses it to critique the very systems that shape our learning environments. Using red chalk and sticky notes marked with feedback, I walked through my neighborhood that I grew up in and know, especially those impacted by educational neglect, infrastructural decay, and institutional failure. Instead of evaluating students, I evaluated the space around me.
If we expect children to revise their work and schools to meet certain standards, why aren’t our systems asked to do the same?
The project draws heavily from Situationist ideas of the dérive, which is the wandering not to arrive but to observe, notice, and feel. I also was influenced by détournement, which is the act of hijacking dominant symbols and turning them back on the structures that created them. Just as McKenzie Wark writes in The Beach Beneath the Street, the dérive allows us to remap our cities not by utility, but by affect. My walk remaps Tucson through critique, care, and confrontation.
The feedback I left ranged in grades, adding additional feedback using that educational language. Each one represents a poetic form of critique. Within the beach beneath the street, I was strongly influenced by chapter 3, The Torrent of History, which gave us a story reflecting on the idea of how reusing and rewriting existing ideas (détournement) can challenge who controls knowledge and history. It connects to my project because I use grading, a tool from my past, to question and critique broken systems in public spaces. I am reclaiming the idea of the red pen, much like the authors reuse stories, to use it to poetically critique rather than grade students.
Each comment was temporary. The notes written on sticky notes will slowly get tattered, torn, thrown away, faded, and decomposed. The chalk will move with the weather, disappearing with the wind, sun, and rain over time. I documented every intervention through photographs, which I am compiling into a digital zine and public archive. These images do not just capture neglect, they expose the emotional residue of growing up and working in these spaces.
Areas of critique (rubric categories): equity and inclusivity, infrastructure & accessibility, support for human well-being, voice & representation, and cleanliness & care. I mainly focused on how the space impacts those who live around it, especially the children I usually teach.
Walk 1:
Walk 2:
Walk 3:
Reflect & Process:
This was an incredibly fun project to do, though it involved a lot of trial and error. I was inspired by Andy Goldsworthy’s use of natural, temporary materials and wanted to incorporate that sensibility while putting my own spin on it. I chose to work with chalk because, like Goldsworthy’s materials, it is impermanent and responds to nature over time.
I began with a dérive, a drifting walk around my parents’ neighborhood where I lived for 18 years. I let myself wander intuitively, taking notes on my phone whenever I felt a connection to a space. I focused on identifying places that either succeeded or failed in several areas: equity and inclusivity, infrastructure & accessibility, support for human well-being, voice & representation, and cleanliness & care. I especially looked for spaces that reflected the lived experiences of students I once taught.
However, I ran into issues. Chalk does not work on every surface, and I did not want to risk damaging private property. So I adapted. I used a felt-tip pen and sticky notes as alternatives. I also experimented with chalk pencils and river rocks, which are commonly used by Tucson’s rock painting community. I loved the idea of using rocks as canvases, but unfortunately, the red markings would not show up. It was important that it was red, so I had to pivot. I tried different rock textures and colors, but only white worked, which defeated the purpose.
One detail not visible in the photos or video: I used tape on the back of some sticky notes to help them stay in place. Over time, they will fall off, get torn or crumpled, and fade under the sun, just like how real grades can be forgotten as life moves on. I plan to return later to clean up the remaining notes and possibly reuse the materials.





I absolutely love this piece. It speaks beautifully to the fact that systems oftentimes don't value the critique of the very people who use the infrastructure that they are in charge of. You graded public work in both infrastructure, signs and art in a way that both critiques and/ or supports those works based off of how they relate to and benefit the people in that area. I love this subtle yet very powerful way to hold the systems accountable in making things fair and safe for everyone. I would've loved to see peoples reactions to the chalk/ sticky notes you left around as they came across them as well- I bet you helped a few people reflect on the importance of inclusivity and public safety. Overall really great work!!
ReplyDeleteThe idea of leaving critiques, notes, and grades for places or things that we often see in our daily lives is an interesting take. I loved the way you pushed this idea and made me wonder who will take the time to read them? Who will see it and agree or disagree? This could be taken even further, such as on billboards or posters. Fantastic job as always, Kiara!
ReplyDeleteWhile I was reading, it made me think of sites like Yelp or Google Reviews, which record people's thoughts on an object or service. How good would it be to start a group of some sort in neighborhoods that "grade" different developments to ensure they meet the needs of surrounding residents? Usually, these are left up to governmental structures, but I think the people's voices matter the most since they're the ones interacting with these objects the most. There are a lot of hazardous, inconsiderate, or underdeveloped objects in an environment that could use a direct comment on them. This is a fun idea that encourages people to be considerate of their environments.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this project, the way we correct young kids and then don't have the same standard for adults is such an insightful way to think. Throughout this piece I felt like the grades were given in such a passive aggressive way that I actually loved, because sometimes leaders need little nudge. I liked the different forms of media, like the chalk was one of my favorites, I feel like incorporating more elements could be really interesting. Overall I really loved your project!
ReplyDeleteThis project is incredibly moving and conceptually rich. Your reversal of the grading system into a critique of public space is powerful, especially given your background in education. The use of dérive and détournement adds depth, and the ephemeral materials beautifully reflect the fragility of these overlooked environments. Brilliant work.
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